For Review: Rhythm Template #5, Option #2

[Nick Ketter]

Hi Richie,
Here’s an attempt at Rhythm Template 5, Option #2.

As always, I appreciate any feedback you have.

https://youtu.be/KVmjzMOgv6M

Thanks!

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[Richie]

Hi Nick,

It’s not bad, but could be better! It’s hard to critique through this means because it requires too much explanation, mainly for your note choices in several measures. I usually reserve that for one on one lessons.

As far as the theory goes be sure to notate your 7’s as b7’s. Currently you have them as maj 7’s. Also, note that in measure 7 you made your 2nd NT a PT instead of an NT. In meas 9 you are starting with a 7 on the 2nd str but there is no 7 there. Also, try to include the “3” whenever possible in the measure at least for now. 🙂

Richie

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