Feedback Requested: Module 5 Template #9 Option 2

[Nick Ketter]

Hi Richie,
Here’s my attempt at Rhythm Template 9, Var 1, Option 2.

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[Richie]

Hi Nick,

I like this one better than the previous one, although both have several theoretical errors, especially in the notation. Also, some of your note choices in the previous one at the point of chord change are weak. Try not to end and start a new chord change repeating the same note. For example ending a I7 chord on a 13 and starting the IV7 chord on the 3rd. It’s the same pitch and does not imply the chord transition very well. If you want to do this, it is better to simply tie both notes and play them only once.

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