Possible Errata, correct me if I’m wrong.
Bebop Calisthenics 5A Exercise 4 Pattern 4 Dorian 3 note enclosure.
You seem to be playing an extra b7 (Eb) on the G string descending which seemingly should not be there when comparing it when playing pattern 2 on exercise 4. Is this correct?
Even so, the extra note creates a symmetry between the 2 phrases that is slightly off without it.
Also ascending, you’re playing an upper double chromatic instead of lower.
Jack.