Thanks for sharing! I hear the neighboring tones, some UA and enclosures which is good!
Some advice, if I may….I can hear a lot of traditional blues phrasing which is good for starters. However, to get more into the jazz idiom we need to adopt a different mindset. It’s all in the details…
Try not to start on the root so often on every chord change. As a matter of fact, try to avoid starting on it altogether for now if you can. Try to make your primary guide tones (3 and b7) and occasional 5ths, your beginning notes.
Also, try to play over the bar line connecting the changes more often. In other words try not to play so many phrases that end before a chord change. Connect the changes using voice leading, again preferably to the closest 3 or b7.